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Very Interesting piece ! :) I really like the mushrooms, I also like the types of trees here and the way the leaves were done
If I may offer some criticism, the tree on the left (foreground) looks a little strange. The green on the base must be moss, or indirect lighting ? (reflection of grass).  I doesn't quite work the way it should. While viewing from a distance, in looked like the tree was transparent at the base.  Then it gets too dark/dull  at the top so it almost looks like its in the middleground, with those other trees. What it looked like to me from a distance was some kind of semitransparent thing, and then another tree starting behind that, near the dark tree.   Perhaps there could be a little less green on the bark. Mostly, the tree needs to stand out more. Add in white or something ?. Right now, it seems to camouflage with whats behind it. 
also, the grainy  texture  doesn't fit in in certain places, simply because of level of detail (i think). It gives the picture less depth than it should have. It seems to conflict with the painted part, which is much less detailed/ differently detailed  because it's of a completely different style altogether.yeah,  I realize that this is probably a result of it being a speed paint, with not much time to detail and blend that stuff in.
Anyhow, great work. Keep the paintings coming ! :) 
Love your work. If possible, consider do a detailed, full painting sometime, when you have enough time :D